King of the North

asheylee & nightfall: Thank you guys for that! I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. It was really inspired by one of my friends story so that is probably where most ...

It was a good read, if not a little short. I hope to read more.

I should have also mentioned spacing out the paragraphs and dialogue once you took it out of pre. Otherwise its just a big block of text, yet another thing that ...

KJ: Thanks. That really is Chirnis' personality. She can be kind until you annoy her. It just so happens that crying annoys her. But I understand where your coming from. ...

Will do. Thanks again.

Absynthe: Thank you for reviewing. It really helps to get feedback from people. Lol, yeah I realized that tears didn't spray I was just being dramatic. But your right, I'll ...

Stella Thomas: Thanks for your words. I agree with you on the word silky. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed. Also, on the name comment, I'm not sure ...

The first paragraph really draws you in. It was good. I think it could do with being a little lengthier, but other than that it was great. Not much else ...

I hope that's better.

Thank You BBB. Your review meant a lot to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it.